power of words

After reading this poem by Antonia at Reluctant Painter, I wrote this:

the throat has no subtle strangulation
when met by rhythms such as those
beating hearts that slip off
the page into my porcelain soul

i take my leave
midst the course palpitations,
check my vigil at the door
and wisp myself away

on the words you leave me with
while going about your day
unconcerned with my fate,
my formidable challenge

8 Responses to “power of words”


  1. 1 ME Strauss

    My forehead
    moves to frowining aggravation
    to think that someone might have been
    sending words that have no thought
    no moment’s tender taking
    to spare for a kind one,
    a strong and gentle man

    for Garnet
    from
    Liz

  2. 2 shyloh

    Very nice. I just love different styles of poetry.
    Best wishes to you and yours.

  3. 3 Garnet

    Liz- thank you for the gift poem. very sweet.

    The pain of my little ditty is a poignant, almost sweet wound inflicted by beauty, the beauty I felt when reading Antonia’s poem Kundalini. I wrote the first part as a comment, to convey how choked up I felt after reading it.

    Shyloh-Thank you. I liked your site. Please come visit again.

  4. 4 Antonia

    Garnet, what to say, such a beautiful poem.
    Now, I am the one who is choked up.

  5. 5 yemanja36

    I’m speechless… (Sigh)

    You’re an amazing poet, Garnet…

  6. 6 Garnet

    Antonia, I’m so honored to have you visit and leave a note! Really, that means a lot to me.

    To both Antonia and Yemanja, it’s comments like yours which justify the effort. Thank you. G

  7. 7 Stormwind

    hauntingly beautiful…

  8. 8 Etchen

    Simply amazing. I truly enjoyed your poem.

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